Lyrics, poems, prose,
Sometimes, Heaven knows.

Monday, January 17, 2011

Zeke

A puff of smoke
A gentle breeze
Can't hold them in my hands

Sparkling stars
On summer seas
The writing in the sand

If I could make this world anew
I would include them all
And I'd include our brief affair
The ride was worth the fall
Posted by at

9 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2011 at 11:03 AM

    LOL,i like the ending,it's both humorous and meaningful. I can alsmost see the small smile on your lips as you wrote those lines.


    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/01/17/rain/

    ReplyDelete
  2. The Girl In The CornerJanuary 17, 2011 at 3:33 PM

    "The ride was worth the fall"

    ^Brings it together so well :)

    ReplyDelete
  3. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJanuary 17, 2011 at 5:24 PM

    love it..

    beautiful
    A++

    ReplyDelete
  4. ReggieJanuary 17, 2011 at 7:19 PM

    You got a smile out of me...I like his

    ReplyDelete
  5. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2011 at 9:02 PM

    haha wow! thank you for sharing.. here's my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/19/my-whole-world/

    ReplyDelete
  6. debiJanuary 18, 2011 at 4:37 PM

    The ride was worth the fall...
    I like that.

    ReplyDelete
  7. AnonymousJanuary 18, 2011 at 7:05 PM

    Sometimes it doesn't have to be mutual to be fun.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Scott M. FreyJanuary 19, 2011 at 10:30 AM

    wow, really nice :-)

    ReplyDelete
  9. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2011 at 4:57 PM

    Nice! Must of been a wild ride!!! Very well done.

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)